It's blurry and choppy. Not really a montage mainly trades. Sensitivity and fov too high, makes video quality look pretty bad. The recording looks like 30fps (mot sure though) but if it is I recommend at least 60. The screen is too crowded for a pvp vid try to keep it clean and simple . And what render software are you using?
Texture pack doesn't look very smooth .
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Use my texturepacks :/ LOL